Heh, like I said to rucksackjack, even if a pregnant monster was predictable, at least that means it fit into the rest of the story well.

I am disappointed that I wasn't able to make this one as funny as the others, but it just wasn't something that I could force. Glad you enjoyed the funny bits that still made it in.

I loved how you casually mentioned that the first creature they killed was a male.

Wait, you lost me - While they shoot at the female one, Teiger wonders aloud if they've killed the male one yet, which was supposed to let the reader know that there were two of them, thereby setting up for the arrival of the second monster. Did that not come across correctly?

Thanks for catching the extra "them." I read the story out loud to myself during proofreading, but I was getting really tired by the end of the night and still missed that one.

Glad you enjoyed episode #3, and thanks so much for all the nice things you had to say about my writing.