This was great! I love the format of this piece; it works perfectly for what you're trying to achieve. I'm heavily reminded of Jack going crazy in The Shining.
Oh, that poor tomb guardian. If only thet could go against nature to have the thought that THEY could be the one to smash the Tomb and the other guardian wouldn't stop them.
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Oh, that poor tomb guardian. If only thet could go against nature to have the thought that THEY could be the one to smash the Tomb and the other guardian wouldn't stop them.