Fiction - brigits_flame entry - Mud

This is my entry for the writing activity on the brigits_flame community. The topic for week #1 of September is "Mud," for which I have written the following:

( Ye Story )

A bit carried away...

I think I got a little carried away with this week's entry for the writing community. For comparison:

July week #1 - Heavy - 1189 words
July week #1 - It Hurts When I Do This - 1240 words
July week #1 - Happiness is - 890 words
July week #1 - Tears of God - 1883 words

September week #1 - Mud - 2378 words

Oops.