At first I thought you were going for another retalling of Wicked or something, but no! This turned out great. You've got a great way of injecting sarcasm and character into your dialogue which always makes it fun to read. Poor Percival. XD I love that she taps her fingertips together in applause. I guess you can't fault her manners. :)
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Date: 2011-08-02 10:35 am (UTC)