Finally.

I'm sick and tired of staring at Episode 16. I filled in those last few gaps between paragraphs and just published the damn thing. I'm not completely happy with it, but I've decided that I probably never will be. Maybe now I can work on episode 17, and this will be fun again. It was too much work writing that last one, trying to tie up the loose ends in the continuity mixup. I deeply regret the whole "episode out of order" thing, even though I enjoyed writing the first part of it. Oh well - there's still some stuff in episode 16 that I like. It's just the crappy, contrived way that I finally had to tie parts of them together that bugs me.